Thursday, 7 June 2018

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Hi my name is Sonny. I go to Riverdale School. I am Māori. I have two brothers and two sisters. My Favorited food is butter chicken. I am good at sports and learning.

I enjoy sports and my favorite subject is math. My challenge is to get better at reading and writing. My goal is to be the smartest in the school. My personal achievement is to be one of the best rugby players in the world.

I’m looking forward to the trip to Rotorua. My personal achievement is to be better than before in my learning.
The person that inspires me is my mum because she is always there for me and because she is responsible and shows honesty and respect to others.

4 comments:

  1. i love your whole entire story

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  2. sup sonny what are you doing

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  3. Kia ora sonny
    I really liked how you made your writing about your whanau
    I learnt that that you care about others
    Mā te wā

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  4. Kia ora, I am Avril from Ormond School.
    I really liked how you said what your favorite subject for learning is.And its maths
    I learnt that your looking forward to go to the trip to Rotorua sometime
    Maybe you could write more about your leaning and where your from and what you would like to be when you much more older.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my bloghttp://ormondavrilw.blogspot.com/

    Mā te wā
    Avril

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