Thursday, 5 July 2018
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Kia ora, I am Marlin from Makauri School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you used figurative language like i huufed and puffed like a lion.
I learnt that Kaiti hill must be harder to walk than it looks.
Maybe you could tell us what time you left how long the walk was.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog here
Mā te wā
Marlin